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MONTH PIC 2ND ROUND: PIC Nº02
Each month, as usual I open a poll in which my visitors choose one Time Attack that will become the pic of the month, the best works always win, but there are occasions when we wish to win the two first places, now we'll have a poll every 5 months with the second placed pic fighting to be the Month Pic... Enjoy!
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Cada mes como es costumbre hago una encuesta en la cual todos mis visitantes eligen al Time Attack que se convertirá en la imagen del mes, siempre quedan los mejores trabajos como ganadores, pero hay ocaciones en que deseariamos que ganen los dos primeros puestos, ahora se hara una encuesta cada 5 meses con los trabajos que alcanzaron el segundo puesto para mostrarse como un Month Pic mas... disfrutenlo!
ORIGINAL PIC
Each month, as usual I open a poll in which my visitors choose one Time Attack that will become the pic of the month, the best works always win, but there are occasions when we wish to win the two first places, now we'll have a poll every 5 months with the second placed pic fighting to be the Month Pic... Enjoy!
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Cada mes como es costumbre hago una encuesta en la cual todos mis visitantes eligen al Time Attack que se convertirá en la imagen del mes, siempre quedan los mejores trabajos como ganadores, pero hay ocaciones en que deseariamos que ganen los dos primeros puestos, ahora se hara una encuesta cada 5 meses con los trabajos que alcanzaron el segundo puesto para mostrarse como un Month Pic mas... disfrutenlo!
ORIGINAL PIC
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactIm not used on doing critiques , but if you allow me, i would like to share my thoughts about this pic.
-Positive:
a)The angle/perpective. It gives the character a little more dinamic while she try to tease you by pulling down her panties. A good perspective can raise double your work and i think this one could be the case.
b) Your color technique is really impresive. Somehow its seems very simple but im sure that is not simple for you to color like this. Little advice: try to blend some of the lights and shadows according to the enviorment instead of using only the standar -sking tone that you usually use.
-Negative:
a) the expresion. She is somehow in like a "neutral or serious mode" for what the pic really wants to show " Teasing, sexy- concept". I think you should work more on your facial expresion in order to match the concept of what you are trying to show.
Final thoughts:
Indeed its a very good-quality pic but it lacks on emotion or feelings. Try to work more on those concepts on your next work, i wil asure you the results will be even better -
PD. i hope you dont take personally this critiques, im trying to help