Hi there, well. That picture is really really great, I liked when I saw it at the moment. The vision was nice, but I think you can do it better, maybe I'm wrong but I have that feeling. What I most liked in this pict was the hands pose. Direct, implicating, interesting. That was a good point, truly. I can say that thecnque could go better. I recommend you to use different types of traces, so you can give more expresion to your compositions. Its a tip, you can take it or not. In conclusion, I think is a good work, but with the proper techniques and advices from me or the rest of the community, you'll do a big improvement ^^.